i guess some of us died along the way

how long has it been since his lips have met with another's sweetened skin?
how long did he wait for his lover to indulge in such a heated sin?
there's something peculiar about this pair.
how much longer will it take for someone to say,
"dear child! two of a kind isn't right! something inside must have been lost along the way."

how far did he travel down that road to see you one time more?
how far was the path he had to take to see you behind the final door?
there's something peculiar about this scene.
how much longer will it take for someone to begin to say,
"my boy! it's unnatural to care so much! something must have been added along the way."

how many more words must be spoken before i have you in my arms?
how many more words must i shove at you before you'll cause me no more harm?
there's something peculiar about this man.
how many more times must i have to say,
"we are all abnormal within the average world, but i guess some of us died along the way."

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HOW SOON, HOW MANY, WHEN

how soon shall his lips, a pushing force upon mine, a staggering power, consume me in their cage?
how soon will this blade of false hope either strengthen or fall down?
when shall this most confusing pair here the conforming sound?

while floating closely to the edge, not far for he shall not face yet his fears
of living in a hidden world, where the other's music cannot be heard.
there is something peculiar about this love of theirs,
their lovely hidden bird.

how many more must be moved away before their secrets break free?
sometimes enough is never quite enough, and he let the separation be.
sometimes lovers are made from the same body. contrarywise, im sure this is still so,
"whether you love him through and through, sometimes you have to let go"

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well there's my 3 minute improv for the day.
hope everyone had a great new years! i know i did ;)

i went to an awesome party! i made out with every girl there! plus a guy who is now my boyfriend :)
luckily he knows im gay (and thoroughly enjoys it) so i can make out with girls and still be okay :D
i believe our understood rule is "we get to be straight with each other, but if we want to be gay, that's okay too."
he is the STRAIGHTEST guy you will ever meet though. so i guess that rule is for me only XD so i can have girl, but he's my only boy :)

today has been a dream, and im the cloud that carries it to the next person. feel the rain and pass it on

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zerogeass 2011-01-03 23:03:31

Your little poems and improvs always make my day, they're so beautiful.

And be sure to have fun with your boyfriend.

Give him a hug for me :D

redjokerx 2011-01-03 23:03:31

rofl dont worry, ill give him plenty of hugs XD

danicos 2011-01-03 23:04:49

I see your improv and i quote you with me, my hands, my keyboard, and my sense of double checkin wat im about tosay to off.
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I don't know, when's the last time she wanted to kiss his lips not by force
How long till she let go of her parents morals to fall to such dark lust?
How long till you say to the pair, it isnt meant to be?

While he was on the road to see his dove, did she hope he'd get lost on the way?
Did she not want to see his face so badly that she hid all the way?
There is something peculiar about this scene....
How long till she says, my lov for him is no more, something must have happend, down trhe road.

How many shoves must be gently pushed to break free from his arms?
How many more words of lov mus she take before she can say,"enough is enough"
There is something peculiar about this woman
"We're all abnormal inside this imperfect globe, but I guess we died inside along the way, along this long , lonely road".

redjokerx 2011-01-03 23:04:49 (Updated 2011-01-03 23:36:44)

i feel like countering yours with an improve inspired by yours. lets see how i fare :)

EDIT: i forgot to place a time on mine, this took me 2 minutes :)

zerogeass 2011-01-03 23:50:58

Make improv more often sweetie.

its just beautiful :)

redjokerx 2011-01-03 23:50:58

i like writing with no plan, it makes things all the more interesting in the end :)

danicos 2011-01-05 19:23:01

I think i lov you

redjokerx 2011-01-05 19:23:01

thanks hon XD

DarkX64 2011-01-08 11:43:41

Zero, get a hold of yourself. She's taken (in the male department) and, last I checked, men aren't good at sharing their females and vice versa. That's 1.

2, nice poem! That was improv? That's dang good and I agree with Blake. You should do more of it! And I should do more Guardian... >_<

3, since it was new years, the multi-make outs are excusable, tho I'm a tad jealous. I have a by the book abstinent girlfriend. How far have I gotten? We had our first longer than 1 second kiss on the lips on New Years! YAY! ...<_< Yeah... But I shan't complain, she's a gamer and an artist, and she's also a potential singer! She's just got to learn how to hold a pitch. So back to my point, yes, it was New Years, the time of not giving a crap and doing crazy crap. But I think you should try being more loyal to your man, provided he deserves it. A relationship is between two people, there isn't a loophole saying I can just pick others on the fly and have you back when I want. And yes, there is the open relationship, but I would avoid. Those breed nothing but unwanted trouble. I can't make you listen to me. But I have at least said my piece.

I'm glad to know you enjoyed your New Years and we should speak more often! It's been a long while.

-DarkX.

redjokerx 2011-01-08 11:43:41

ooo! ooo! im going to make a list too!

X64, my boy is pretty good about sharing. as long as it's with girls only.

2. thank you! i love improv, because then whatever i say is how i feel, or it's unedited, or what-have-you.

3. i can make out with any girl i want, as long as i stay away from boys. you need to train your girl to love being physical! it's a part of humanity, and i say CHARGE RIGHT IN! she sounds nice though! i love my boy, but he thinks its sexy when i make out with girls. and i love to make out with girls. if he was bi, then i would be fine with him making out with guys, but he is straighter than straight. our relationship isn't open, it's a "i love you, you are mine, but i like watching you get on top of other girls."

new year's was AWESOME. i made out with every girl there! and i looked awesome in my dress, my boy says it was hot :)

danicos 2011-01-12 22:51:38

You made me cum in my own sack

redjokerx 2011-01-12 22:51:38

ejaculation!