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let's try this the way the school likes it

Posted by redjokerx - October 4th, 2010


to cut of my hands so i no longer can dance
with the man made of gold, who also no longer dances a pau de deux in the candlelit room.

the world is made into that of a conflicting statement.
every step east will take you westward, not as the wanderer wishes, which is truly north, despite what he claims.

a canvas laid blank until the picture printed inner
delight at the time a new leaf was turned,
just as believers fall fast into sinners,
their punishment be righteous, their fate be earned.

END

well, there you have it. a poem thingy that sounds like one of the ones you read in school. one of the ones you get tested on. yuck. although i do like this one. a rhyme scheme was becoming to controlling. minus the end, this is one step closer to true free verse


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Awesome.

thanks

OMG!! your growing up so fast im gonna cry *cries*

dont cry! XD

dont try too hard. if you do then it might not come out the way you want it to. if i'm in the mood i can write a good song out of no where. but if i stop to think about it too much then it comes out unsatisfactory. so just go with it

its sort of the same with me, if im required to write something, then i have to be in the right mindset to write, but if im just sitting there, i can write like 3 pages of beautiful nothings XD

i just love your poetry, its so very beautiful.

well im glad that i can half change and it's still acceptable XD

oh and nice poem. thought i wrote that in the first comment but aparently not

why thank you :)

go to my post and read my beaurtful poetry bitch. jk but realy check it out

it was really good! :D

Nice bit of poetry there. I hated geting tested on poems in school. Its all ok now I have left though :).

meanie! leaving school... -sniffles-

how is life treating you sweetie?