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kwestion mark?

Posted by redjokerx - November 11th, 2009


so this is a verse of a song i came up with.
it has a set beat and note for each sylable, so try reading it like a poem.
here we go!

through the best of the
times,
the worst in my life.
you've sat there,
and listened to me.
can't you see?
it's you who im wanting.
will you be,
there when i call your name.
i know now,
it's you who im needing.
i can believe
without any shame

if it sounds sucky, im sorry!
it sounds good when i sing it, so ill try to get a mic soon so i can do audio submissions (if you can do singing)
it's kinda like a love song. but definatley not meant for a falsetto!


Comments

i think it's wonderful.

i do hope your voice sounds as beautiful as you look.

i keep on repeating myself, but
you are soooooo sweet!!! ^_^

im a soprano btw
i CAN hit the "lower" notes, but it take more effort
^_^

wonderful.

unfortunatly, due to so many injuries and a bout with some crazy ass sickness a week ago, my voice is rather scratchy. it's not quite deep, but it's not high either.
but i know i cannot sing.

not that i want to sing anyway, truthfully, i would rather listen than compose music, the only instrument i have ever learned to play was the Trombone. but i think the Piano is the most beautiful sounding instrument, folowed by the Violin.

ur trombone skillz attracted the metal in all teh broken-ness ^_^

maybe, i tried to learn the Flute, but i just don't have the lungs for it.

the flute pretty much made my asthma go bye bye.
now im healthier than the average person!
it just hits bad when i get sick...
FLUTE ROx!! xD (my 1st instrument)

well, i suck at it.

i can make better music on a Piano, or my Trombone.

or better yet, the most beautiful sound of them all, THE ROAR OF AN ASTON MARTIN V8 VANTAGE ROADSTER'S ENGINE!!!!

*WRAAAAAAARRRRRlalalalalaaaaa*
lolz

but may i ask?

who are you refering to in this song?

i was thinking of a lot of different people.
im kinda fickle
there are things i like in each person that makes me love them.
some people think that makes me a bad person because 'no one can say i love you to so many people and actually mean it'
i was thinking of some people i actually know, and some people who i met here.
i heart all the people for the little things they say that i look forward to each time i blog, or check my email!
(prolly making no sense...) ^_^

well, i don't think that makes you a bad person.

in faxt i think that makes you a wonderful person because you have enough love to go around.

thanx!!
so here's my little piece of anti-broken...
the cut i got on my leg, its almost all gone!
yay! and my parents never saw it!
(don't know how, they've seen my sleepy clothes)