so this is the next page.
sorry if it gets on ur nerves to have to read it a bit at a time, but reading a lot at once confuzzles me!
have fun with page 2!!
"Odd," Scarlet's thoughts were echoing against the high walls of the cave. "What happened to the small space I was in?" but she ignored it, and focused on reaching the end of the seemingly endless space in front of her.
Without any warning, the cave opened to clearing of grass. She had never seen anything more odd, yet she was drawn to its glow.
It was utterly facinating, how a pond could be so still, that it was like a reflecting glass. She could see the bottom, but could clearly see her own face at the same time. It looked like she was under the water.
She looked to the moon and smiled. This was where she wanted to be forever. But when she looked at the water once more, she found another thing strange. She couldn't find the moon in the reflection.
She forgot everything when she heard it. It was an enchanting lullaby played by a sound much deeper than her violin. Immediately, she recognized it: a cello.
The notes swam through her mind, but was quickly drowned by her mother's scolding voice, "Nothing ever good will come from your music." Scarlet's tears began to flow, softly, the opposite of the sky from before, and she fell to her knees. The music came to a halt. Replacing it was a sound of equal beauty, a young man's voice ringing in her ears. "Has my music," the voice paused as a source stepped forward from a shadow. "Has it make you cry?"
Scarlet lifted her head up to meet his sweet gaze. He had light chestnut hair and eyes of pure gold. Dressed in black, he looked ready for a funeral. He couldn't be more than 17. She tried to stand, but fell again.
"My name is Leonardo, but you may call me Leo, Miss Scarlet." he said gently, helping her up once more.
(end of page 2 of...let's go with 3)
notez: the time when this takes place is the one thing that confuses even me. (i AM the "author" after all!) it has to take place when names like this would be used, that a girl could not punch the random guy who talks like he's from the past, and that wouldn't be creeped out by the whole thing. but let's ignore that and just roll with it! ^_^
zerogeass
hmm, love interest, all right then always helps a story.
where did you come up with the name Leonardo?
lulz i just remebered Leonardo Leonardo from Clerks, the animated tv show......"It's from Ikea" lulz
redjokerx
stupidly enough, it took me longer to come up with that name than the time it took to write the story. silly right? idk, it sounded cool, the kind of "im a gentleman, here's a rose" kinda thing. it's his outward personality.
time for teh last page!!!
...i think