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    Quite Lonely

    Posted by redjokerx - November 1st, 2009


    it's really quite lonely
    here all alone.
    sitting here doing nothing.
    still and silent as
    a poem.

    it's really quite quiet.
    it's rather poetic
    i sit silently still on
    my silver-mooned night.
    but it's not.

    the moon is waning,
    though silent it is.
    i do not sit still.
    i quiver with fright.

    i know what has happened.
    i know what is to come.

    but i will not stand
    for it.

    with my bags packed, im
    ready to go.
    but wait.

    what am i waiting for?

    a shadow moved, for a
    shadow himself it is.

    i cannot leave.
    it's raining.
    and storming.
    he is angry.

    i will stay here,
    silently, a soulless thing.
    waiting for blue skies

    it's excitement, yet fear.
    this feeling i get when i
    speak.

    if my words come out wrong,
    it's hard to fix.

    my words never come out
    quite as i mean.

    it's ironic, really.
    i know how i feel,
    but i can never say it.
    like my words have
    washed away.
    till i don't know either

    (end of poem)

    i wanted to post this one cause i need to know if it sucks or not.
    i wrote it 1 or 2 years ago, and my writing wasn't all that good, so i need to know if i should trash this one. comment peas!! have a nice day


    Comments

    pure awesome, makes me interested in poetry

    im glad!

    PM me, I love your darkness.

    I'm Eric.

    HI ERIC!!