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one hundred

Posted by redjokerx - October 30th, 2009


so this is the poem i was talking about writing.
note: it is MINE. i worked very hard to make it, so please don't steal it m'kay?

100 words, 100 times
100 stories, 100 rhymes

100 days left to be
100 hours to fast, to free

100 pages, 10 hundred marks
100 years to finish from start

10 thousand thoughts from
100 minds,
to take only a day to find

that special poem,
with 10 hundred page,
in which 100 words
were not saved

to start with 100
and end with none
to burn with flame from
10 hundred suns

to count so high
your mouth will burn,
and it finally ends

100 more lives i have to change
never to be stopped by the
ever-lasting rain

(end of poem)

so tell me what you think (don't be TOO mean) lol
if anyone doesn't understand part of it, put it in the comment and ill try not to confuse you even more


Comments

hmm, you write poems, interesting, most Authors here arite stories, but i still like a good poem every now and then.

very good work, liked it a lot

thanks!
im working on a "book" if you wanna call it that. its like 70 pages.
look for me in Barnes and Noble!! :3

really? well tell me when you start, and tell when you write another poem.

i already started, and i gonna post another poem like right after this, i don't think its as good tho...

in borat voice: VERY NICE

kwestion mark?